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Bradley Ramsey's avatar

This might be your best poem yet, my friend. Sweet Cthulhu, some of these lines hit me like a ton of bricks. I think this one is my favorite:

"You've walked through Hell

What's one staircase more?"

If this wasn't already connected to a larger work, I'd have to insist that you expand it into a full book or series. It stands on its own, for sure, and the words echo well beyond the page, but damn if I don't want more. 👏👏

E.J. Moon's avatar

This is a really precise meditation on the push and pull of life. Excellent!

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