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Bradley Ramsey's avatar

God Mina, this might be my favorite thing you've ever written. Concentrated, contrasting, perfect emotion here. Highs and lows right alongside each other, and one of the best opening paragraphs I've ever seen.

The prose is also stunning. Deeply poetic, powerful word choice, and lines that don't hold back. This is just pure, perfect writing from top to bottom.

It reminds me that sometimes paradise is just the place where we feel like we can finally breathe.

Maryellen Brady 💗📚's avatar

The red hot sting of slaps and punches almost fades among the cool night air.....yep this is definitely cozy 💝🙌💝

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